GRAMMAR CORRECTION HELP!?

Hello, and Good Evening, Everyone! My name is Wyllie Yip, i am a 2nd year student from II-C under the advisory of Mrs. Connie Carey. I am running for SSG President. If I am elected, I am very confident that, under my leadership, school rules and regulations will be improved. I would like to be President because I want to make improvements on the cleanliness and appearance of the school, and also improve other school problems. I will help make Basak Night High School a better place and more conducive environment for learning. So, I hope you will vote for me, so that all the propositions I presented to you will be carried out. Thank You!